The two most common words on the Internet, second only to “Buy now”.
But here’s the problem: Online consumers have evolved. Our audiences are more jaded, more distracted, more cynical. They need firmer, more compelling nudges and stronger reassurances, or they’ll just ignore us and our messaging.
We need to eliminate the friction of the online sales process for them. Problem is, instead of thinking like a customer, most brands think like brands. We want people to buy our stuff, sign up for our newsletters, contact us, so our micro-copy says:
- Join today
- Sign up
- Contact us
Meh. We need smarter, friction-free micro-copy. But, as you’ll soon discover, there’s a fine line between clever and contrived.
But wait! What’s micro-copy?
Here’s a definition:
Micro-copy is the text you see on websites, apps and products that tells users what to do, provides context, addresses concerns, and hopefully improves the brand experience. It’s the small pieces of copy on buttons, error messages, tooltips, and ‘Thank you’ pages. It’s also the POPI, GDPR and cookie pop-ups (that we all hate), the labels on forms, the notes inside empty fields, and the extra-fine print.
As you can imagine, micro-copy is the part of any project that tends to be under-estimated – or even neglected. I mean, most people skim-read online content. But when they want to know what they have to do, they require clear instructions. What’s more, great micro-copy can boost retention and conversion rates. So…
Think of human behaviour
Awareness is, as they say, the first step. Before writing a single word, think about the user flow – where your users go, in what sequence, when, why, with what outcome in mind – and the potential friction points that may exist along that path.
When you have their needs, goals, and journey front of mind, you can guide them. You can use a sentence, label or call-to-action to help them get somewhere, instead of allowing them to hit a possible dead end.
For example, a user may not click if they’re unsure what’s on the other side of the button. Perhaps there’s a worry that they might be charged immediately. If that’s a possibility you could use your micro-copy to reassure them: “No payment yet!”
In addition, when you include generous and clear “Success” and “Error” messages”, you confirm for the user that actions were completed or interactions failed. This valuable feedback expertly comforts them. But try to avoid faceless micro-copy like “The transaction was completed”, “Registration was successful”, or “Order received.”
Be smart with the nudge
Micro-copy should be actionable, because most users need a slight, indirect push. For your little clusters of text to be a real driving force, include action words (active verbs) like try, search, type, explore, enter, filter.
You’ll see lots of learn more, read on, get info, download, submit, connect, etc. These are common, and they work, but they’re not going to make anyone’s brain all fizzy and happy. For that, you need to show the benefit, not the commitment.
“Buy it now” and “Sign up for our newsletter” are “hard asks”, says The Startup’s Jano le Roux.
They ask for weighty commitments. But people don’t want to commit (and why should they?) so instead of highlighting the commitment, highlight the benefit of the commitment.
Write like you talk
You knew I was going to include this, right? Because conversational copy draws people in.
Great micro-copy should feel like you’re talking to a friend; like there’s rapport being built and trust being earned. And it’s important to keep it on-brand.
You might start a sentence with a conjunction, like “And” or “But”. You might use sentence fragments or ask questions (“Don’t I always?”). Beware of getting carried away, however. Charm does not guarantee effectiveness, especially when it comes to the parts of the user journey that require more care, sensitivity or strategy.
Name with intention
As copywriters and communicators, it’s often our job to name things. This can be something quite small, like giving a label to a form field, or something big, like naming an entirely new feature. Often, we’re asked to give opinions on clients’ name ideas.
I frequently have to dissuade clients from website menu items like “Dream on” (Packages), “Fly away” (Flights) or “Inspo” (Photo Gallery). While micro-copy should have personality, it shouldn’t be too clever. Its goal is guidance, not amusement.
Either way, it’s important to remember that the names we give things – even little things – have power. And, the more description we need to provide for the user, the higher the mental effort required to understand what we’re talking about.
This is why you should always test your micro-copy with actual users, to measure its clarity and ensure that it resonates with users, not just with you and your team.
Here’s a clever example for you:
Digital product manager Nicolás J. Engler designed a button with a changing label. When the user clicks on it, the label changes from “submit” to “sending”. This small but thoughtful change lets the user know that the system is working in the background to process whatever they submitted. And once the process is complete, the label changes from “sending” to “done”.
In short (ha ha!), micro-copy can help us to guide users, engage them, cue them into functionality, and create pleasant experiences for them. But if we are to move people with our tiny words, each one must work as hard as it possibly can.
This original op ed by Tiffany Markman was originally published on MarkLives.com